Emily should learn how to write in the first person. Emily still owes her audience pictures and information. Perhaps less time making excuses and more time taking pictures? Emily should do what her wiser older brother says, if she knows what is good for her.
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Emily should take and post more pictures. She should probably also post something about her sweet trip.
Emily's Boss,
Ben
Emily is busy working and will post photos in her own time (thank you!) and doesn't want to jinx her trip before all plans are made!
Plus, Emily does not have a family related boss. If she did, his name would not be Ben.
Is Madeline going to have to call you 'boss'?
Emily should learn how to write in the first person. Emily still owes her audience pictures and information. Perhaps less time making excuses and more time taking pictures? Emily should do what her wiser older brother says, if she knows what is good for her.
-Ben
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